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A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money,either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years ,or to pay for two open-air concerts.It has asked for feedback from the general public. describe the bebefits of sponsoring the sports team summarise the bebefits of paying for the concerts *say how you think the company should spend the money.

A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. *describe the bebefits of sponsoring the sports team *summarise the bebefits of paying for the concerts *say how you think the company should spend the money. NBOd

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know about the benefits of sponsoring the sports team in our area. By making children's sports team, it will be very much effective now as well as in future progress for those children who want to make their career in the sports. Children will get appropriate guidance and training for the particular sports from recognize coach person. In contrast, the company pays for the concerts, these will also be benefited such as preparing for concert's stage, the public longe, prepare for the media advertisement and the participant's accommodation. Also, the judge who will be invited for concerts to make the final decision need to pay according to their charges of the fees along with their accommodation and the food charge. So these are also very costly and finding out the sponsor for funding for two concerts is very difficult. By analyzing all the above benefits for both options, I think better training of education about sports from a well known coach and his staff prepare our children for the sports team. Sports training for two years give a positive impact on children for future prospects too. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Amita Dholakia

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Thank you for your consideration.

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