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Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: • where and when you lost your bag • what your bag looks like • what its contents were Write at least 150 words.

Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: • where and when you lost your bag • what your bag looks like • what its contents were bkKX

Dear sir/madam I am writing this letter to report about my lost handbag. Last Wednesday, March 12th, I traveled from London to Vancouver on flight number 4140. I put my handbag in the overhead cabin which is the most popular place. The travel made me bored while I was very stressed about my graduation procedure. Therefore I was in a tremendous hurry, and I have forgotten to pick my handbag up. My lost bag is made of black leather with a golden zipper. It contains not only an iPad and all essential educational documents that evincing I am graduating but also the brand new Apple watch which my sister gave to me as a graduation gift. Honestly, I have no time to waste, and I have to start the graduation procedure the day after tomorrow. Therefore, I would be grateful if you could guide me on how I can get it back as soon as possible. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Sincerely, Raya Sadat

Dear sir/madam

I am writing this letter to report about my lost handbag.

Last Did you mean to refer to the current year? March 12th, 2021 is not a Wednesday, but a Friday.
Wednesday, March 12th
, I traveled from London to Vancouver on flight number 4140.

I put my handbag in the overhead cabin which is the most popular place.

The travel made me bored while I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuated
stressed
 about my graduation procedure.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Therefore,
Therefore
 I was in a tremendous hurry, and I have forgotten to pick my handbag up.

My lost bag is made
 of black leather with a golden zipper.

It contains not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 an iPad and all essential educational documents that evincing I am graduating This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 the 'brand new' seems to be a compound adjective in front of a noun. Use a hyphen: "brand-new".brand-new
brand new
 Apple This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 which my sister gave to me as a graduation gift.

Honestly
, I have no time to waste, and I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 the graduation procedure the day after tomorrow.

Therefore
, I would be grateful if you could guide me on how I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 it back as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

I look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Sincerely
,

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Raya
 Sadat