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You recently organized a party for your company at a hotel. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter, Describe the party and how it went. Explain why you were pleased with the hotel’s service. Suggest some improvements that the hotel could make.

You recently organized a party for your company at a hotel. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter, Describe the party and how it went. Explain why you were pleased with the hotel’s service. Suggest some improvements that the hotel could make. lNPQ
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter in regards to, as you are aware of we had organized a farewell party for senior citizens in your hotel and our company is thankful for the service provided by your staff. To begin with, the party was arranged by me on behalf of our company, an arrangement of event and decoration of hall was eye-catching. The dining table and chair setup were proper. The dinner menu along with food service was appreciable. In addition to this staff cooperation and service was great. However, I would like to make some suggestions for your betterment is that you should check electrical appliances before starting an event. There was an issue with the mic and sound system. It was creating a disturbance in the program. If it happens it can affect your customer reviews and ratings. Otherwise, your service was acknowledgeable. In the conclusion, our organization is fully satisfied with your management. Yours faithfully Swati
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
in regards to
, as you are aware of we had organized a farewell party for senior citizens in your hotel and our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
is thankful for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
provided by your staff.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with, the party
was arranged
by me on behalf of our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
, an arrangement of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
and decoration of hall was eye-catching. The dining table and chair setup were proper. The dinner menu along with food
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
was appreciable.
In addition
to this staff cooperation and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
was great.

However
, I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
suggestions for your betterment is that you should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
electrical appliances
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
starting an
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
. There was an issue with the mic and sound system. It was creating a disturbance in the program. If it happens it can affect your customer reviews and ratings.
Otherwise
, your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
was
Possible spelling mistake found.
acknowledgeable
.

In the conclusion, our organization is
fully
satisfied with your management.

Yours
faithfully


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Swati
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IELTS letter You recently organized a party for your company at a hotel. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter, Describe the party and how it went. Explain why you were pleased with the hotel’s service. Suggest some improvements that the hotel could make.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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