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You lost your bag from a supermarket last week full stop the super market has closed down for a week, and you can't get in. You are a bag contains your mobile phone and some knots you need urgently and driving licence and some important letters full stop write to the manager to us how you can treat claim the bag you should write at least 150 words.

You lost your bag from a supermarket last week full stop the super market has closed down for a week, and you can't get in. You are a bag contains your mobile phone and some knots you need urgently and driving licence and some important letters full stop write to the manager to us how you can treat claim the bag owy9
Dear sir/madamMy name is jettin George, I am writing this letter to invite your attention towards a missing item from your esteemed supermarket on March 26 2021. As it was a weekend day, the supermarket was so crowded. So I get my belongings and bag in Reception area and went for buying items. Unfortunately, because of the heavier Rashi I took one hour to finish my purchase, it made me le to my office. Hence, after paying the bill I just ran into office without taking my bag. Nonetheless, after 2 hours I remembered about it, but on that due time frock was completely closed because someone in the supermarket infected by Corona. It was a piece of shocking news for me because all my important letters, some notes which is urgent for my boss, my driving licence moreover, my mobile phone is in the bag. Since after hearing the news that one week shutdown of Supermarket, I am so worried. All the belongs belongings are tremendously important for me. It should be grateful if you could help me Tu you get the bag bag as soon as possible, even without my mobile phone I could not able to inform my superior about the document missing which they have lot of companies personal data. I expect you will arrange someone to take out my bag from the Reception area. I will promise you that after the proper sanitation only I will use it. Please find my address below for further contacts. Anticipating for your positive response. Yours faithfully, Jettin George
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worried. All the belongs belongings are
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Anticipating for your
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response. Yours
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,
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IELTS letter You lost your bag from a supermarket last week full stop the super market has closed down for a week, and you can't get in. You are a bag contains your mobile phone and some knots you need urgently and driving licence and some important letters full stop write to the manager to us how you can treat claim the bag

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