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sometimes people think its better to choose friens have same opinions.but some think they should contradict their opinion.discuuss both points n give opinion

sometimes people think its better to choose friens have same opinions. but some think they should contradict their opinion. discuuss both points n give opinion 5n0m
Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Amita Dholakia. I am writing this letter to give you feedback about short cookery course which was held on the last week. I like to describe the few things that I enjoyed a lot. First thing, The chef was an expert to cook varieties of dishes but here he cooked unique recipes about Punjabi cuisine such as panner stuffed with peas vegetable curry and mix flour flatbreads. Thus I was enjoying how to do variations in cooking to make unique; moreover chef shares a small tips to avoid mistakes. Furthermore, a chef was enjoable so I enjoyed a lot with my colleagues this cooking course. In addition, I started implementing cooking tips which were given by him since the course, even though I cooked vegetable curry. I started making curry with variations of vegetables. I would like to suggest doing many more different cuisines cookery courses such as Continential, Italian cuisin and so on offered by school. Indeed, it will increase the number of participants in the course. Thank you for asking for my feedback. Yours sincerely, Amita Dholakia
Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is
Amita
Dholakia
. I am writing this letter to give you feedback about short cookery course which
was held
on the last week. I like to
describe
the few things that I enjoyed a lot.

First
thing, The chef was an expert to cook varieties of dishes
but
here he cooked unique recipes about Punjabi cuisine such as
panner
stuffed with peas vegetable curry and mix flour
flatbreads
.
Thus
I was enjoying how to do variations in cooking to
make
unique;
moreover
chef shares a
small
tips to avoid mistakes.
Furthermore
, a chef was enjoable
so
I enjoyed a lot with my colleagues this cooking course.

In addition
, I
started
implementing cooking tips which were
given
by him since the course,
even though
I cooked vegetable curry. I
started
making curry with variations of vegetables.

I would like to suggest doing
many
more
different
cuisines
cookery courses such as
Continential
, Italian
cuisin
and
so
on offered by school.
Indeed
, it will increase the number of participants in the course.

Thank you for asking for my feedback.

Yours
sincerely
,

Amita
Dholakia
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IELTS letter sometimes people think its better to choose friens have same opinions. but some think they should contradict their opinion. discuuss both points n give opinion

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