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You reacently bought of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken write a letter to the shop manager in your letter describe the problem with the equipment explain what happened when you phoned the shop say what you would like the manager to do

You reacently bought of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken write a letter to the shop manager in your letter describe the problem with the equipment explain what happened when you phoned the shop say what you would like the manager to do lw3Q
Dear sir/madamIn the beginning, I would' like to inform you about my equipment. The Brand name is Preethi. It was a brand new mixi. significantly, it was not working from the past Wednesday on 21 'st MarchFundamentally we bought the mixi from the past two months before. It had a starting trouble and it was over heating. i am a working woman though I managed somehow. I have a garantee and warrantee card for the mixi. Necessity to call the shop manager for numerous of times. But he will not giving a proper response from the following days. Certainly the manger needs to give a priority to my phone call. I would like to ask neither the mixi needs to replace nor to re place the spare parts. Heneeds to give assure to complete all the regards. I am waiting for your promptYours sincerely, Mary
Dear sir/
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madamIn
the beginning, I would' like to inform you about my equipment. The Brand name is
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Preethi
. It was a brand new
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mixi
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
significantly
, it was not working from the past Wednesday on 21 'st
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MarchFundamentally
we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
the
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mixi
from the past two months
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
. It had a starting trouble and it was over heating.
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am a working woman though I managed somehow. I have a
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garantee
and
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warrantee
card for the
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mixi
. Necessity to call the shop manager for numerous of times.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
he will not
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "give"
giving
a proper response from the following days.
Certainly
the manger needs to give a priority to my phone call. I would like to ask neither the
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mixi
needs to replace nor to re place the spare parts.
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Heneeds
to give assure to complete all the regards. I am waiting for your
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promptYours
sincerely
,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Mary
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IELTS letter You reacently bought of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken write a letter to the shop manager in your letter describe the problem with the equipment explain what happened when you phoned the shop say what you would like the manager to do

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  American English
1 paragraphs
144 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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