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Dear Sir/Madam, Hope you are doing well. Sub: Application for direct Masters PLEASE REVIEW MY WORK AND LIFE EXPERIENCE. Request to the admission, board of directors and dear committee members for a helping hand. I am Sushant Nandavadekar working as a 2nd Marine Engineer (NOC 2274 - Skilled Labour 'B'), Indian citizen, 35 years old, I am Holding Class 3 ''Power Engineer’’ Marine Engineer Unlimited CoC from the World's 1st ranking Marine engineering college ie: Grade A Engineering college in the UK, I have strong experience over 9 Years on Cruise Ships and 7 Years on Commercial Ships total of 16 Years at Sea as I served for the community in Shipping Worldwide. Looking for a career shift, on Shore land based jobs from Sea for a better Family life. As, I have been doing Management jobs on board ships and would like to do Masters. Since I want to shift from sea to land, Masters is a professional degree, and most students who graduate start working in the professional world, I will have a great network of people working in different companies. These people can open many doors for me regarding better jobs, and more networking opportunities. Please assess my education and attached transcripts, If you accept my application for Masters accordingly please contact me for payment and admission process. I have attached all the documents Transcripts, My updated CV, IELTS with my Class 3 Power Marine Engineer MCA UK Licensing and all advanced Management level courses. Below is my detailed education map, 1. I started in 2017 and Currently I am Studying Chief Marine Engineer Officer watch diploma course (Blended Campus and Distance) from the UK for upgradation to 1st Marine Engineer Licence, I have completed the course structure, but my examination is pending. 2. In 2013 after 3 years of work experience at Sea as a Motorman, I had done a 3rd Marine Engineer Officer Watch (Power Engineer) EOOW III/1 Course (2 Year apprenticeship) NVQ Level 3 from the UK - 74% PASS 3. In 2005 Pre-Sea Course for 6 months in India. 4. 10TH - 64. 4% In 2003 and 12 PCM - 42. 83% In 2005 5. IELTS Overall 6. 5 BAND CEFR LEVEL B2 L-7. 5 S-7 R-6 W-6 TRF NUMBER 20IA002698NANS061G 6. National and State Level Sports Player inn TUG OF WAR Note: - As my case is unique and I have a different background in Marine Engineering with 16 Years of experience out at SEA. So, It is My humble request that you please review all my attached documents, Once I get a green signal to proceed that I am eligible then I will process the payment and admissions process. -- Best Regards Sushant Nandavadekar Mobile No: – +91 8850-319-242 Whatsapp E-mail Address: nandavadekarsushant@gmail. com Skype Id: - sushant. nandavadekar
Dear Sir/Madam,

Hope you are doing well.

Sub: Application for direct Masters
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PLEASE
REVIEW MY WORK AND LIFE EXPERIENCE.

Request to the admission, board of directors and dear committee members for a helping hand.

I am
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Sushant
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Nandavadekar
working as a 2nd
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Marine
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Engineer
(NOC 2274
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Skilled
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Labour
'B'), Indian citizen, 35 years
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, I am Holding
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Class
3 ''Power
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Engineer’’
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Marine
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Engineer
Unlimited
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CoC
from the World's 1st ranking
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Marine
engineering college
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ie
: Grade A Engineering college in the UK, I have strong experience over 9 Years on Cruise Ships and 7 Years on Commercial Ships total of 16 Years at
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Sea
as I served for the community in Shipping Worldwide.

Looking for a career shift, on Shore land based jobs from
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Sea
for a better Family life. As, I have been doing Management jobs on board ships and would like to do Masters.

Since I want to shift from
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sea
to land, Masters is a professional degree, and most students who graduate
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start
working in the professional world, I will have a great network of
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people
working in
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different
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companies
. These
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people
can open
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many
doors for me regarding better jobs, and more networking opportunities.

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Please
assess my education and attached transcripts, If you accept my application for Masters
accordingly
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please
contact me for payment and admission process.

I have attached all the documents Transcripts, My updated CV, IELTS with my
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Class
3 Power
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Marine
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Engineer
MCA UK Licensing and all advanced Management
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level
courses.

Below is my detailed education map,

1. I
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started
in 2017 and
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I am Studying Chief
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Officer
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diploma
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(Blended Campus and Distance) from the UK for
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upgradation
to 1st
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Licence
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structure,
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my examination is pending.

2. In 2013 after 3 years of work experience at
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Sea
as a Motorman, I had done a 3rd
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Officer
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(Power
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(2
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74% PASS

3. In 2005
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Pre-Sea
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for 6 months in India.

4. 10TH
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64. 4% In 2003 and 12 PCM
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42. 83% In 2005

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B2 L-7. 5 S-7 R-6 W-6
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NUMBER 20IA002698NANS061G

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Sports Player inn TUG OF WAR

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As my case is unique and I have a
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background in
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Marine
Engineering with 16 Years of experience out at SEA.

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, It is My humble request that you
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please
review all my attached documents, Once I
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get
a green signal to proceed that I am eligible then I will process the payment and admissions process.

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Best Regards

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Sushant
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Nandavadekar


Mobile No:
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+91 8850-319-242
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nandavadekarsushant@gmail
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