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3- You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

3- You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take rwRk
Dear Jane, I am Nancy and hope you are doing well! I am student from the communication evening class. This is to let you know that I will not be able to continue the course any longer. In order to increase my fluency and pronunciation, I chose business communication course. Although I study at evenings, I have a regular job at a multinational company as business analyst. Since I am promoted as senior analyst, I am afraid that, I would have to work for long hours in the evening to coordinate with the clients from different time zones. So far I was fully satisfied by the course delivered, I feel extremely saddened to know that I do not have a choice other than discontinuing from the class. I will be extremely thankful if you could help me to get a partial refund of the course fee. Looking forward in hearing from you, Yours Sincerely, Nancy Clairre
Dear Jane,

I am Nancy and hope you are doing well! I am student from the communication evening
class
. This is to
let
you know that I will not be able to continue the course any longer. In order to increase my fluency and pronunciation, I chose business communication course.

Although I study at evenings, I have a regular job at a multinational
company
as business analyst. Since I
am promoted
as senior analyst, I am afraid that, I would
have to
work for long hours in the evening to coordinate with the clients from
different
time zones.

So
far I was
fully
satisfied by the course delivered, I feel
extremely
saddened to know that I do not have a choice other than discontinuing from the
class
. I will be
extremely
thankful if you could
help
me to
get
a partial refund of the course fee.

Looking forward in hearing from you,

Yours
Sincerely
,

Nancy
Clairre
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IELTS letter 3- You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
155 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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