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Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays

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Dear John, How are you doing? It's been a long time since we have spoken in person. I have been planning to visit your place for vacation during the coming summer hoildays. When thinking of where to spend my vacation, you were the first person to cross my mind and I remembered you mentioning how good a place Mauritius is for a perfect holiday. My furlough starts in the mid of March to first week of April, so I am thinking of spending the last week of March with you. Due to the holiday season, even I was able to book the flight ticktes at low-cost. After a long research on internet, I found that there are quiet a plethora of places to visit in your country. Firstly, I definitely do not want to miss out the water sports activities such as paragliding and scuba diving which are world wide famous. Secondly, I also would like to visit the national park with those different species of fauna and flora which you where talking about during our last coversation. Finally, I want to try out the seafood in the popular Indian restaurent that you have posted in the instagram. As you may know the place better than me, I would need you to suggest if there are any other places we can spend a good time together. I am really excited and eagerly waiting for you reply. See you soon. Regards, Sandeep
Dear John,

How are you doing? It's been a long time since we have spoken in person. I have been planning to visit your
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place
for vacation during the coming summer
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hoildays
.

When thinking of where to spend my vacation, you were the
first
person to cross my mind and I remembered you mentioning how
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good
a
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place
Mauritius is for a perfect holiday. My furlough
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starts
in the mid of March to
first
week of April,
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so
I am thinking of spending the last week of March with you. Due to the holiday season, even I was able to book the flight
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ticktes
at low-cost.

After a long research on internet, I found that there are
Did you mean "quite"? 'quiet' means 'silent', 'quite' mean 'very' or 'to a moderate extent'
quiet
a plethora of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
places
to visit in your country.
Firstly
, I definitely do not want to miss out the water sports activities such as paragliding and scuba diving which are
Did you mean "worldwide"?
world wide
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famous
.
Secondly
, I
also
would like to visit the national park with those
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different
species of fauna and flora which you where talking about during our last
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coversation
.
Finally
, I want to try out the seafood in the popular Indian
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restaurent
that you have posted in the
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instagram
.

As you may know the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
better than me, I would need you to suggest if there are any other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
places
we can spend a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
time together. I am
really
excited and
eagerly
waiting for you reply.

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See
you
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soon
.

Regards,

Sandeep
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays

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8 paragraphs
240 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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