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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words

After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. You do NOT need to write any address. 121G
Dear John, How are you? I hope you are well. My name is Amita Dholakia, to whom you looked after an accident. I am writing this letter to say thank you for saving me. Let me explain in more detail. I am a middle class ordinary man who works for his family. I am only person working in my family. My all family members have appreciated your afford to help the unknown person on the road. In a current time, all people got busy schedule. No one thinks to waste time for others. You are a good human being as well as best care taker. Nowadays, very few people do it for unfamilier person. I request you to visit my home with your family. Give me a chance to serve you at my home. my whole family have appreciated your humanity. I think next sunday is the best time to take dinner at my home. please, accept my invitation. I will wait for your reply. Give regards to Arav. Yours Sincerely, Amita.
Dear John,

How are you? I hope you are well. My name is
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Amita
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Dholakia
, to whom you looked after an accident. I am writing this letter to say thank you for saving me.

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explain
in more detail. I am a middle
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class
ordinary
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man
who works for his
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family
. I am
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only
person working in my
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family
. My all
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family
members have appreciated your afford to
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help
the unknown person on the road. In a
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current
time, all
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people
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got
busy schedule. No one
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thinks
to waste time for others. You are a
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good
human being
as well
as best care taker. Nowadays,
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very
few
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people
do it for
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unfamilier
person.

I request you to visit my home with your
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family
. Give me a chance to serve you at my home.
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my
whole
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family
have appreciated your humanity. I
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think
next
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sunday
is the best time to take dinner at my home.

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please
, accept my invitation. I will wait for your reply.

Give regards to
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Arav
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Yours
Sincerely
,

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Amita
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IELTS letter After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. You do NOT need to write any address.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
172 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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