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You lost something and someone found it and sent it to you. Write a letter to that person.

You lost something and someone found it and sent it to you. Write a letter to that person. x2eXb
Dear Mr Brown, I am writing this letter to extend my sincere thanks to you. I am a consumer and every day I take bus Route 133 to work. Last Friday when the bus reached the stop where I was to get off, my cell-phone suddenly rang. This was an important call which I had been waiting since morning so while I was talking on the phone I left my laptop on your bus. The next day in the morning while I was getting ready for work, I realised that my laptop was not in its place. I understood that I left it on the bus and made an immediate call to the Lost Property Service of the City Transport Company and after some time they gave me your number for contact. It was great fortune you found my computer and took it with you. There was many important information related to my work and all e-mail adresses of my business partners. Again with my thanks for your thoughtfulness. Yours sincerely John Brian
Dear Mr Brown, I am writing this letter to extend my sincere thanks to you. I am a consumer and every day I take bus Route 133 to work. Last Friday when the bus reached the
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where I was to
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off, my cell-phone
suddenly
rang. This was an
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important
call which I had been waiting since morning
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while I was talking on the phone I
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left
my laptop on your bus. The
next
day in the morning while I was getting ready for work, I
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realised
that my laptop was not in its place. I understood that I
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left
it on the bus and made an immediate call to the Lost Property Service of the City Transport
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Company
and after
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some
time they gave me your number for contact. It was great fortune you found my computer and took it with you. There was
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many
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important
information related to my work and all e-mail
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adresses
of my business partners. Again with my thanks for your thoughtfulness. Yours
sincerely
John
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Brian

IELTS letter You lost something and someone found it and sent it to you. Write a letter to that person.

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  American English
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172 words
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