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To go to abroad for studying at school overseas

To go to abroad for studying at school overseas 539Lp

Dear Madam I am writing to enquire about studying school overseas. I feel this is an excellent opportunity to study overseas but still confused as shifting to another location is always risky. I would appreciate it if you could give me some information about your school. Studying in abroad was my childhoods dream but I am of two minds now. If I go there where can I stay, does your school have dormitory? If so, It would be better, if I live with another countries students, through this way I would increase my foreign language. Significantly I was delighted to see that, if in your dormitory would have a separate kitchen, bathroom. To give an illustration of cooking unique national dishes, furthermore I have to say that I completely disagree with this statement, if somebody use my own things. The consequence is, if you would not mind I ask you individual kitchen. It would be of great help, if you could inform me. I look forward to hearing from you Your faithfully Ann Smith

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enquire
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but
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 confused as shifting to another location is always risky. I would appreciate it if you could give me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
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 information about your school. Studying in abroad was my childhoods dream This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I am of two minds This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
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. If I go there Did you mean "were", the simple past of "to be"?were
where
 can I stay, does your school have dormitory? If This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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, It would be better, if I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 with another countries students, through this way I would increase my foreign language. Significantly
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see
 that, if in your dormitory would have a separate kitchen, bathroom. To give an illustration of cooking unique national dishes, furthermore
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have to
 say that I completely disagree with this statement, if somebody The pronoun 'somebody' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "uses", "used".usesused
use
 my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 things. The consequence is, if you would not mind I ask you individual kitchen. It would be of great This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
, if you could inform me. I look forward to hearing from you Your faithfully
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