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organized holiday with your friend. However you must change your plan

organized holiday with your friend. However you must change your plan 95AVr

Hello Sam, Hope you are doing well amidst the pandemic. Just wanted to inform you that I’ll not be able to make out for our vacation. I was really excited about our trip next week, that I even purchased a new DSLR to capture our lovely moment and ordered a camping tent too. All day long I’m dreaming about how we will enjoy trekking and paragliding. Unfortunately, my final year exams are postponed to next week exactly on the day we planned our trip due to floods in our city. Three papers are scheduled to first week of July, so it’ll be hectic till end of June. If possible, we can plan our trip on second week of July and I know it will be hard to change all the plans upside down. Meanwhile, I’ll speak to the resort manger today whether he can cancel or reschedule our booking according to our dates. Hope this will work and we can enjoy our vacation. What would be your suggestion? and if you have other plans get back to me as early as possible.

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 a new DSLR to capture our lovely moment and ordered a camping tent too. All day long I’m dreaming about how we will enjoy trekking and paragliding.

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