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short trip postpone letter

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Dear sir, I am writing this letter to request you for making some changes to my reservation at your hotel. I am Charlie Johnson resident of Canada. I have booked two business suits for me and my Project Coordination team at your hotel ‘The Emirates Grand’ between the 23rd and 27th of July, this month. My booking ID is Z9254. Unfortunately, due to Covid pandemic situation, the air travel company had postponed our tickets. Now, we will reach there on the 10th of August next month. So, I request you to kindly change our booking between 10th and 13th of August, next month. As it will be a business meeting, we will require some technical support from your side. We will need a sitting arrangement of 10 people, a projector, an audio system and good internet connectivity also. I look forward to your prompt response. Yours faithfully, Charlie Johnson.
Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to request you for making
some
changes
to my reservation at your hotel.

I am Charlie Johnson resident of Canada.
I
have booked two business suits for me and my Project Coordination team at your hotel ‘The Emirates Grand’ between the 23rd and 27th of July, this month. My booking ID is Z9254.

Unfortunately, due to
Covid
pandemic situation, the air travel
company
had postponed our tickets.
Now
, we will reach there on the 10th of August
next
month.
So
, I request you to kindly
change
our booking between 10th and 13th of August,
next
month.

As it will be a business meeting, we will require
some
technical support from your side. We will need a sitting arrangement of 10
people
, a projector, an audio system and
good
internet connectivity
also
.

I look forward to your prompt response.

Yours
faithfully
,

Charlie Johnson.
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IELTS letter short trip postpone letter

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
149 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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