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You should invite your boss to youre marriage ceremony

You should invite your boss to youre marriage ceremony p5gB3
Respected Sir, This is to inform you that I am senior engineer in your company and working here from last five years. My work performances always lead your company to high achievement standards. Sir I am pleased to inform you that 17 January has been fixed as the date of my marriage. Of course, the printed invitation has been sent to you but I must write personally to invite you to join me on my wedding occasion. It would be great honor for me if you join me at my very special occasion. I know you have your own priorities and you are not legally bound to join my personal get to gathers. But still I will wait for your humble decision to join me on my great day. Anxiously waiting for your joining at my wedding. Sincerely, John Cates
Respected Sir,

This is to inform you that I am senior engineer in your
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company
and working here from last five years. My work performances always lead your
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company
to high achievement standards. Sir I am
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pleased
to inform you that 17 January has been
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fixed
as the date of my marriage.
Of course
, the printed invitation has been
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sent
to you
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but
I
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must
write
personally
to invite you to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
join
me on my wedding occasion. It would be great honor for me if you
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join
me at my
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
special occasion. I know you have your
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own
priorities and you are not
legally
bound to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
join
my personal
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get
to gathers.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
still
I will wait for your humble decision to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
join
me on my great day.
Anxiously
waiting for your joining at my wedding.

Sincerely
,

John
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IELTS letter You should invite your boss to youre marriage ceremony

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
139 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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