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Write a letter to a boss of your company. You have missed an important meeting.

Write a letter to a boss of your company. You have missed an important meeting. NmqPN
Dear Mr White. Please accept my apology for missing an important meeting with international ventures. I understand this has caused a lot of inconvenience to the company. I can not defend my actions but I want to tell you that my stay that day was two hours behind. I am truly sorry such a lousy mistake. I will surely change my working strategy and will definitely keep everything noted for future references. Please forgive me and provide another chance to prove myself. Yours sincerely Mrs Black.
Dear Mr White.
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Please
accept my apology for missing an
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important
meeting with international ventures. I understand this has caused
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a lot of
inconvenience to the
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company
. I can not defend my actions
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but
I want to
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tell
you that my stay that day was two hours behind.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am
truly
sorry such a lousy mistake.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
will
surely
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change
my working strategy and will definitely
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keep
everything noted for future references.
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Please
forgive me and provide another chance to prove myself. Yours
sincerely
Mrs Black.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a boss of your company. You have missed an important meeting.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
86 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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