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you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of the lost items

Dear Carlos, I am writing to lodge an insurance claim for an item I lost recently while I was on a trip to New York. The item was a Casio Smartwatch. Its dial was of white colour and the strap was in black colour made of silicon. Its value was of $350. I have enclosed the receipt and the picture of watch for your reference. While they are not financially valuable, they are quite valuable to me as it was gifted by my wife. Unfortunately, while I was at my hotel's room balcony watching the sunset, I leant over to the edge and slipped because of which my watch fell from the 18th floor. There was no hope it survived this fall. I took out my insurance on the 24th of March, just prior to my trip. I would therefore request your company to reimburse me the value of my smartwatch as a part of my travel insurance so that I can replace it with a new watch. My insurance number is 555 3131 323. Thank you for your assistance. Looking forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Prayas

Dear Carlos,

I am writing to lodge an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withallowancecoverageguarantee
insurance
 claim for an item I lost recently while I was on a trip to New York.

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 number is 555 3131 323.

Thank you for your assistance. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully
,

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