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You have received invitation for a leaving party. Write a letter, why you will not be able to attend the party. Also talk about your colleagues leaving office and what you would like to tell him/ her for their future.

Dear Mr. Thakor, I am writing this letter to inform you that I will be not able to attend your farewell on Friday this week. You have received invitation for a leaving party. Write a letter, why you will not be able to attend the party. Also talk about your colleagues leaving office and what you would like to tell him/ her for their future. Although, we have worked for only 3 years, however we have successfully accomplished numerous projects in this short duration. Your passion, commitment and honesty inspires young employees, and a plethora of things can be learned from you such as teamwork, punctuality and respecting thoughts of your subordinates. Keep being assiduous and passionate about your roles and responsibilities in your upcoming job. I congratulate and wish you the best of luck for your future endeavours. Yours sincerely, Subhiraj Singh
Dear Mr.
Thakor
,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I will be not able to attend your farewell on Friday this week.

You have received invitation for a leaving party. Write a letter, why you will not be able to attend the party.
Also
talk about your colleagues leaving office and what you would like to
tell
him/ her for their future.

Although, we have worked for
only
3 years,
however
we have
successfully
accomplished numerous projects in this short duration. Your passion, commitment and honesty inspires young employees, and a plethora of things can
be learned
from you such as teamwork, punctuality and respecting thoughts of your subordinates.
Keep
being assiduous and passionate about your roles and responsibilities in your upcoming job.

I congratulate and wish you the best of luck for your future
endeavours
.

Yours
sincerely
,

Subhiraj
Singh
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IELTS letter You have received invitation for a leaving party. Write a letter, why you will not be able to attend the party. Also talk about your colleagues leaving office and what you would like to tell him/ her for their future.

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  American English
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142 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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