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Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to let you know about the issue at my accommodation. I am currently accommodated at room 88 where I share a room with another student. Although I am very happy with the accommodation itself, I find that it is becomming impossible to live with my current room-mate. Let me explain my situation. There are two main problems are making it almost impossible to study. At the moment, I am forced to work in the library which is not always convenient. Besides, the rent agreement for college accommodation clearly states that refrain from makeing too much nosis and not have visitors late in the evenings. If it is not possible tomove my room-mate our, then I would like to request similar accommodation to that Link Hall, I do not mind sharing, but if a single room is avaliable. I would prefer that. Thank you for your consideration, and look forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Dusita
Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing to
let
you know about the issue at my
accommodation
. I am
currently
accommodated at room 88 where I share a room with another student. Although I am
very
happy with the
accommodation
itself, I find that it is
becomming
impossible to
live
with my
current
room-mate.

Let
me
explain
my situation. There are two main problems are making it almost impossible to study. At the moment, I
am forced
to work in the library which is not always convenient.
Besides
, the rent agreement for college
accommodation
clearly
states that refrain from
makeing
too much
nosis
and not have visitors late in the evenings.

If it is not possible
tomove
my room-mate our, then I would like to request similar
accommodation
to that Link Hall, I do not mind sharing,
but
if a single room is
avaliable
. I would prefer that.

Thank you for your consideration, and look forward to your reply.

Yours
sincerely
,

Dusita
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IELTS letter You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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