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You have received invitation for a leaving party. Write a letter, why you will not be able to attend the party. Also talk about your colleagues leaving office and what you would like to tell him/ her for their future.

Dear Mr. Thakor, I am writing this letter to congratulate you for your new job and inform you that I will be not able to attend your farewell on Friday this week. Day before yesterday, my mother who was suffering from fever and cold, she tested covid positive in rapid test as well as in CT scan, unfortunately I was in her contact the whole time. Luckily, my test results are negative so now I am taking care of her as since few days. As a precautionary action, we are instructed by the municipality to remain isolated and quarantined for 14 days. Although, we have worked for 3 years but we have successfully accomplished many projects in this short duration. Your passion, commitment and honesty always inspires young employees, and numerous things can be learned from you such as teamwork, respecting thoughts of your subordinates. Keep being assiduous and passionate about your roles and responsibilities in your upcoming job. I congratulate and wish you the best of luck for your future endeavours. Yours sincerely, Subhiraj Singh
Dear Mr.
Thakor
,

I am writing this letter to congratulate you for your new job and inform you that I will be not able to attend your farewell on Friday this week.

Day
before
yesterday, my mother who was suffering from fever and
cold
, she
tested
covid
positive
in rapid
test
as well
as in CT scan, unfortunately I was in her contact the whole time. Luckily, my
test
results are
negative
so
now
I am taking care of her as since few days. As a precautionary action, we
are instructed
by the municipality to remain isolated and quarantined for 14 days.

Although, we have worked for 3 years
but
we have
successfully
accomplished
many
projects in this short duration. Your passion, commitment and honesty always inspires young employees, and numerous things can
be learned
from you such as teamwork, respecting thoughts of your subordinates.
Keep
being assiduous and passionate about your roles and responsibilities in your upcoming job.

I congratulate and wish you the best of luck for your future
endeavours
.

Yours
sincerely
,

Subhiraj
Singh
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IELTS letter You have received invitation for a leaving party. Write a letter, why you will not be able to attend the party. Also talk about your colleagues leaving office and what you would like to tell him/ her for their future.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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