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you play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play.

Dear Mr. Smith, I was so sorry to hear about your accident. I hope you are felling a lot better today and that it is not too tedious in hospital. The match on Saturday was disappointing. The score was 2 all, probably because you were not there to score that extra goal. The awful thing was that we were winning until 10 minutes before the end, when suddenly they scored another goal. I was so shocked when I saw the ball hit the back of the net. I think the weather was to blame. It was a really wet day and the pitch was very muddy. By the end of the game you could hardly see the grass and we were sliding around in the mud. Everyone was exhausted. Let us know when you are going home and we ill arranged for someone to bring you to watch the next game. The rest of the team send their regards and we all wish you a speedy recovery. Best wishes, Mo

Dear Mr. Smith,

I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 sorry to hear about your accident. I hope you are felling a lot better This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
 and that it is not too tedious in hospital. The match on Saturday was disappointing. The score was 2 all, probably
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 you were not there to score that extra goal. The awful thing was that we were winning until 10 minutes This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
, when suddenly
 they scored another goal. I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 shocked when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 the ball hit the back of the net. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 the weather was to blame. It was a really
 wet day and the pitch was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 muddy. By the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the game you could hardly This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 the Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).grass, and
grass and
 we were sliding around in the mud. Everyone was exhausted
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 us know when you are going home and we Did you mean “will arranged” or is a hyphen missing “ill-arranged” (e.g., ill-treated, ill-advised)?will arrangedill-arranged
ill arranged
 for someone to bring you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 the next
 game. The rest of the team This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 their Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).regards, and
regards and
 we all wish you a speedy recovery. Best wishes, Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.Mo.Mo!Mo?Mo:Mo,Mo;
Mo