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An art gallery in your town is looking for volunteers to work in the art gallery at the weekends. You would like to do some working the art gallery in your free time.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing for express my interest in working at the art gallery as a volunteer, my name is Luka I am 24 years old and I am in the last semester of contemporary art at the University my intension is finish in two months my career so I need to do some practices, according to the request from my university the gallery could be is the perfect place for me. I can help you doing the tours for the visitors and explain them all about the exhibitions or I can organise different conferences about the importance of the painting and the famous artists at the moment, I am agree in help you in everything that you consider for me. I really enjoy the arts, it is my passion and I am ready for start a new job and learn a little bit more in this special gallery of course without any payment back as a I mentioned work as a volunteer, the experience is all that I need. I am available next weekend Saturday all day and Sunday at the afternoon you can contact me at this phone number 0873487289 or just email me back. Yours faithfully, Luka Smith

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Yours faithfully
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Luka Smith