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You live in an English speking country and you want to do some voluntary work. Write a letter to the local council to let them know the following.

You live in an English speking country and you want to do some voluntary work. Write a letter to the local council to let them know the following. 2RJrj
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to inquiry about the voluntary work which is provided by your local council. I am living in Brompton and I have some leisure time after complete my study, so, I inform you that I have interest in unpaid work which is perfect for my study. I read this news in last weekend newspaper. Consequently, your post related I completed my graduation in working of agency in India when I was in India. But, I have ability to learn in a very few day so you can trust on me about the work and In a communication skill, I am perfect in it. As a volunter, I knew the responsibility towards the older people and care of them. I would be great work with them and I teach internet related things to the people because in that I had experience also. I look forward from your early reply. Yours faithfully, Namrata Sonani.
Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to inquiry about the voluntary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
which
is provided
by your local council. I am living in
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Brompton
and I have
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some
leisure time after complete my study,
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so
, I inform you that I have interest in unpaid
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
which is perfect for my study.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
read this news in last weekend newspaper.
Consequently
, your post related I completed my graduation in working of agency in India when I was in India.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
, I have ability to learn in a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
few day
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
you can trust on me about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
and In a communication
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
, I am perfect in it.

As a
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volunter
, I knew the responsibility towards the older
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
and care of them. I would be great
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
with them and I teach internet related things to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
in that I had experience
also
.

I look forward from your early reply.

Yours
faithfully
,
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Namrata
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Sonani
.
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IELTS letter You live in an English speking country and you want to do some voluntary work. Write a letter to the local council to let them know the following.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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