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A letter of application volunteer job

A letter of application volunteer job 3bQGl
i am writing to apply for the post of a receptionist at Heart to Heart Charity Office. I saw the advertisement on our school notice board last week. I have experience of doing office work. Last summer, I had a chance to volunteer at the Happy Mind Charity Centre as a front office worker. There, I received visiting donors and volunteers as well. I am reliable, honest, hard-working, and good at communication. I can speak English quite fluently and communicate with foreign people. I knew the receptionist responsible for welcoming guest and receiving donations. If necessary, I can send you a reference from the Director of the Happy Mind Charity Centre. I am available for an interview any day after school or at weekends. If my application is successful, I can start working from next week in the afternoon and at weekends.
i
am writing to apply for the post of a receptionist at Heart to Heart Charity Office. I
saw
the advertisement on our school notice board last week. I have experience of doing office work. Last summer, I had a chance to volunteer at the Happy Mind Charity
Centre
as a front office worker. There, I received visiting donors and volunteers
as well
.

I am reliable, honest,
hard
-working, and
good
at communication. I can speak English quite
fluently
and communicate with foreign
people
.
I
knew the receptionist responsible for welcoming guest and receiving donations. If necessary, I can
send
you a reference from the Director of the Happy Mind Charity
Centre
.

I am available for an interview any day after school or at weekends. If my application is successful, I can
start
working from
next
week in the afternoon and at weekends.
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IELTS letter A letter of application volunteer job

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
142 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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