Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

A letter of application volunteer job

A letter of application volunteer job 3bQGl

i am writing to apply for the post of a receptionist at Heart to Heart Charity Office. I saw the advertisement on our school notice board last week. I have experience of doing office work. Last summer, I had a chance to volunteer at the Happy Mind Charity Centre as a front office worker. There, I received visiting donors and volunteers as well. I am reliable, honest, hard-working, and good at communication. I can speak English quite fluently and communicate with foreign people. I knew the receptionist responsible for welcoming guest and receiving donations. If necessary, I can send you a reference from the Director of the Happy Mind Charity Centre. I am available for an interview any day after school or at weekends. If my application is successful, I can start working from next week in the afternoon and at weekends.

Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am writing to apply for the post of a receptionist at Heart to Heart Charity Office. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 the advertisement on our school notice board last week. I have experience of doing office work. Last summer, I had a chance to volunteer at the Happy Mind Charity Possible spelling mistake. 'Centre' is British English.Center
Centre
 as a front office worker. There, I received visiting donors and volunteers as well
.

I am reliable, honest, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
-working, and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 at communication. I can speak English quite fluently
 and communicate with foreign This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 knew the receptionist responsible for welcoming guest and receiving donations. If necessary, I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 you a reference from the Director of the Happy Mind Charity Possible spelling mistake. 'Centre' is British English.Center
Centre
.

I am available for an interview any day after school or at weekends. If my application is successful, I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 working from next
 week in the afternoon and at weekends. 