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Write a letter to local council regarding the plan of replacement of a library with a supermarket, you need to write the following.

Write a letter to local council regarding the plan of replacement of a library with a supermarket, you need to write the following. Bweg9
Dear sir, My name is Namrata Sonani and I am a resident of sentosa Heights. I am writing on behalf of many other residents of our town to draw your attention towards the requirement of a public library in the area rather than another supermarket. It was published last week local newspaper that in the panwell point AIR supermarket is soon opening on next month. Very few people would actually appreciate this idea. There are already four supermarket in the area that is enough for the area and population living in Mota Varachha as these many stores can easily available to the needs of residents. We all are consider to that placea one new public library is open because in this area we have only one library, which is mainly used by students. Actually, a library is a must for the young adults, middle-aged as well as the elderly in town because many of them seek a quite and peace place where they can easily read peacefully and have access to good reading material. Expecting a favourable response. Regards, Namrata Sonani.
Dear sir,

My name is
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Namrata
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Sonani and
I am a resident of
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sentosa
Heights. I am writing on behalf of
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many
other residents of our town to draw your attention towards the requirement of a public library in the
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area
rather
than another supermarket.

It
was published
last week local newspaper that in the
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panwell
point AIR supermarket is
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soon
opening on
next
month.
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Very
few
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people
would actually appreciate this
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idea
.

There are already four
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supermarket
in the
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area
that is
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enough
for the
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area
and population living in
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Mota
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Varachha
as these
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many
stores can
easily
available to the needs of residents. We all are
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consider
to that
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placea
one new public library is open
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because
in this
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area
we have
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only
one library, which is
mainly
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used
by students.

Actually, a library is a
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must
for the young adults, middle-aged
as well
as the elderly in town
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because
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many
of them seek a quite and peace place where they can
easily
read
peacefully
and have access to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
reading material.

Expecting a
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favourable
response.

Regards,

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Namrata
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Sonani
.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to local council regarding the plan of replacement of a library with a supermarket, you need to write the following.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
181 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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