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My Favourite Book About My School - DPS Mathura Road

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Dear Varun I am writing to you to give you a splendid news. My school admission has been successfully completed and I am now a member of the famous Delhi Public School situated on Mathura Road in Delhi. I am writing to you to give you a splendid news. My school admission has been successfully completed and I am now a member of the famous Delhi Public School situated on Mathura Road in Delhi. I am writing to you to give you a splendid news. My school admission has been successfully completed and I am now a member of the famous Delhi Public School situated on Mathura Road in Delhi. I am writing to you to give you a splendid news. My school admission has been successfully completed and I am now a member of the famous Delhi Public School situated on Mathura Road in Delhi.
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give
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splendid
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news
. My
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school
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admission
has been
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successfully
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completed and
I am
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now
a
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member
of the
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famous
Delhi
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School
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Mathura
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Road
in Delhi. I am
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writing
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give
you a
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splendid
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news
. My
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school
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admission
has been
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successfully
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completed and
I am
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now
a
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member
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famous
Delhi
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Public
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School
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situated
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Mathura
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Road
in Delhi. I am
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writing
to you to
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give
you a
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splendid
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news
. My
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school
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admission
has been
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successfully
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completed and
I am
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now
a
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member
of the
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famous
Delhi
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Public
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School
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