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Applying for scholarship letter

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Suzan Saber and I would like to express my interest in applying For the scholarship program in political science. I am looking forward to pursuing a career in politics, and I am assured that SBW will help me to achieve that. During this time, I am studying at the faculty of commerce, but I am passionate about politics. This passion started when I studied geopolitics in the last year of high school, I enjoyed knowing the political problems and the political systems around the world. Hence, courses like Democracy, citizenship and public policy analysis would give me more insight into how politics is affected in the world today by many factors. I would like to have the opportunity to learn more about politics. Politics is a passion that drives me to continue to make me study abroad where I believe that this scholarship program will enable me to take my skills and knowledge to the next level. I am a hardworking, driven and disciplined applicant, so my academic background makes me an ideal applicant for your program. For the past three years, I was in the organization team in my school, I volunteered in charity works and this taught me a lot of useful things, for instance, being a team player and a more responsible person, which was a very useful experience for me. Furthermore, I am a volunteer in Alexandria Sporting Club to organize events for kids teaching them how to depend on themselves. I am seeking an opportunity for this scholarship due to my financial difficulties and this scholarship offers me the chance to study what I am enthusiastic about and to achieve my goal which is to work as a politician. In addition to this, I want to serve my country and to transfer all the knowledge I have learned. I am confident that my thirst and curiosity for knowledge will be a good foundation for the scholarship program. As I mentioned, I can't afford the price of German language courses in my country due to my financial issues. However, I’m trying to learn it individually using online sources and watching professional German tutors. Studying abroad is a great opportunity for any student because it’s a chance for meeting new people and learning about new cultures, it's a pathway for development and gaining experiences. I have chosen Germany as the place to complete my education because it's one of the most developed countries in the world and it is a great destination for international students to gain a high-quality education that’s delivered by top-ranked universities all over the world.
Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is
Suzan
Saber and I would like to express my interest in applying

For the
scholarship
program
in political science. I am looking forward to pursuing a

career in
politics
, and I
am assured
that
SBW
will
help
me to achieve that.

During this time, I am studying at the faculty of commerce,
but
I am passionate about
politics
. This passion
started
when I studied geopolitics in the last year of high school, I enjoyed knowing the political problems and the political systems around the
world
.
Hence
, courses like Democracy, citizenship and public policy analysis would give me more insight into how
politics
is
affected
in the
world
today
by
many
factors. I would like to have the opportunity to learn more about
politics
.
Politics
is a passion that drives me to continue to
make
me study abroad where I believe that this
scholarship
program
will enable me to take my
skills
and knowledge to the
next
level.

I am a hardworking, driven and disciplined applicant,
so
my academic background
makes
me an ideal applicant for your
program
. For the past three years, I was in the organization team in my school, I volunteered in charity works and this taught me
a lot of
useful things,
for instance
, being a team player and a more responsible person, which was a
very
useful experience for me.
Furthermore
, I am a volunteer in Alexandria Sporting Club to organize
events
for kids teaching them how to depend on themselves.

I am seeking an opportunity for this
scholarship
due to my financial difficulties and this
scholarship
offers me the chance to study what I am enthusiastic about and to achieve my goal which is to work as a politician.
In addition
to this, I want to serve my country and to transfer all the knowledge I have learned. I am confident that my thirst and curiosity for knowledge will be a
good
foundation for the
scholarship
program
. As I mentioned, I can't afford the price of German language courses in my country due to my financial issues.
However
, I’m trying to learn it
individually
using online sources and watching professional German tutors.

Studying abroad is a great opportunity for any student
because
it’s a chance for meeting new
people
and learning about new cultures, it's a pathway for development and gaining experiences. I have chosen Germany as the place to complete my education
because
it's one of the most
developed countries
in the
world
and it is a great destination for international students to gain a high-quality education that’s delivered by top-ranked universities all over the
world
.
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IELTS letter Applying for scholarship letter

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6 paragraphs
439 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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