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you will move to a new city for work. you know some people

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Dear Mr. Jack, I am writing to seek your assistance for commendation as l have got a new job in London. I hope you be well. I have great news to share with you, I got a job in London and will be moving there on the 20th June. As you know, I am not familiar with the city and would love it if you could help me to find somewhere to stay. I would prefer to live close to my workplace, to save on the daily commute. It would also be convenient if it was situated near a tube station and local high street or shopping area. I will no looking for a flat rather than a house. so, a place with one bedroom and kitchen. I would prefer to live somewhere new. Moreover my budget is around £800 per month, I hope that it will be possible to find something at that price, in a central location. I look forward to seeing you again soon when I come to London. Yours sincerely, Sara

Dear Mr. Jack,

I am writing to seek your assistance for commendation as l have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 a new job in London.

I hope you be well. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have great news to share with you, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 a job in London and will be moving there on the 20th June. As you know, I am not familiar with the city and would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 it if you could In informal texts, 'to' is not necessary. Do you mean "help me find"?help me find
help me to find
 somewhere to stay.

I would prefer to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 close to my workplace, to save on the daily commute.  It would also
 be convenient if it was situated
 near a tube station and local high street or shopping area.

I will no looking for a flat rather
 than a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSo
so
, a place with one bedroom and kitchen. I would prefer to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 somewhere new. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreover
 my budget is around £800 per month, I hope that it will be possible to find something at that price, in a central location.

I look forward to seeing you again This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to London.

Yours sincerely
,

Sara