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You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: Explain why you want to do the voluntary work. State what your skills and experience are. Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam You should write at least 200 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: Explain why you want to do the voluntary work. State what your skills and experience are. Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam A5rw
Dear Sir, This is in regards to your enquiry received for the suggestions welcomed for the library. I would like to present my point of view in order to provide you a transparent opinion about the library. I have visited the library quite a few times and I found all the facilities relatively good, but there is always a scope of improvement even in paradise. In my viewpoint the quality and nature of books available in the library is very much distinctive. The various categories of books covers almost each genre like fiction, current affairs, novels, academics, science, philosophy and whatnot. But i feel that there must be automation of all these books into a digital kindle which will help readers in having easy access of the material. Also you can arrange the readable material in more efficient manner as per category so that anyone can retrieve it easily. The sitting arrangement of library is spacious so it helps in having a productive time. But the parking area can be more capacious by making appropriate channeling. An online tracking system will help in knowing to whom library has loaned the book. Thank you for initiating this activity for the betterment of our locality. Yours Faithfully, Sam
Dear Sir,

This is
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
in regards to
your
Possible spelling mistake. 'enquiry' is British English.
enquiry
received for the suggestions welcomed for the library. I would like to present my point of view in order to provide you a transparent opinion about the library. I have visited the library quite a few times and I found all the facilities
relatively
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
there is always a scope of improvement even in paradise. In my viewpoint the quality and nature of books available in the library is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
much distinctive. The various categories of books covers almost each genre like fiction,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
affairs, novels, academics, science, philosophy and whatnot.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
feel that there
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be automation of all these books into a digital kindle which will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
readers in having easy access of the material.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Also
you can arrange the readable material in more efficient manner as per category
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that anyone can retrieve it
easily
.

The sitting arrangement of library is spacious
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
in having a productive time.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
the parking area can be more capacious by making appropriate channeling. An online tracking system will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in knowing to whom library has loaned the book.

Thank you for initiating this activity for the betterment of our locality.

Yours
Faithfully
, Sam
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IELTS letter You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: Explain why you want to do the voluntary work. State what your skills and experience are. Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam

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  American English
5 paragraphs
205 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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