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Your friend will be staying at your home, but you can’t be there. Write a letter in which you explain: - How the keys will get to him/her - How to use the electrical appliances - Recommend some interesting places to visit

Your friend will be staying at your home, but you can’t be there. Write a letter in which you explain: - How the keys will get to him/her - How to use the electrical appliances - Recommend some interesting places to visit GEWB
Dear Jem, Hope this letter find you a radiant health and the best of spirits. I was so delighted to know you are coming for a week holiday. But, unfortunately I have to go attending business trip on 24th March at Delhi. I have to leave on 23th March because of some foreign clients are coming from USA. They requested to me that our products to represent by me hence, I am going to urgently. By the way, I kept my house key with block No 401, next to my block. Her name is Mrs. Shah and kind of nature. You can find everything what you want or need. My friedge store from eatable varieties. I have cable connection ‘Tata sky’ thus you can enjoy it. More over, If you want start gas stave then open the window first. It is safe for you and my home also. Nevertheless, you have problem with the electrical appliances so call Mrs. Shah. She help you. My city is diverse type of haritage place Like, Sidi Saiyyad Mosque, The Adalaj Stepwell, renowad temple which is most famous at Ahmedabad. It is near my house. you can visit by bus easily. Furtheremore, ‘Manek Chowk’ one of the food street, you go there and enjoy mariyad dishes which is venerable. Hope you have a nice time and once again apologise for not give you company. Yours Lovingly, Rinkal
Dear
Jem
,

Hope this letter find you a radiant health and the best of spirits. I was
so
delighted to know you are coming for a week holiday.
But
, unfortunately I
have to
go attending business trip on 24th March at Delhi.

I
have to
leave
on
23th
March
because
of
some
foreign clients are coming
from USA
. They requested to me that our products to represent by me
hence
, I am going
to
urgently
. By the way, I
kept
my
house
key with block No 401,
next
to my block. Her name is Mrs. Shah and kind of nature.

You can find everything what you want or need. My
friedge
store from eatable varieties. I have cable connection ‘Tata sky’
thus
you can enjoy it. More over, If you want
start
gas stave then open the window
first
. It is safe for you and my home
also
.
Nevertheless
, you have problem with the electrical appliances
so
call Mrs. Shah. She
help
you.

My city is diverse type of
haritage
place Like,
Sidi
Saiyyad
Mosque, The
Adalaj
Stepwell
,
renowad
temple which is most
famous
at Ahmedabad. It is near my
house
.
you
can visit by bus
easily
.
Furtheremore
, ‘
Manek
Chowk
’ one of the food street, you go there and enjoy
mariyad
dishes which is venerable.

Hope you have a nice time and once again
apologise
for not give you
company
.

Yours
Lovingly
,

Rinkal
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IELTS letter Your friend will be staying at your home, but you can’t be there. Write a letter in which you explain: - How the keys will get to him/her - How to use the electrical appliances - Recommend some interesting places to visit

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
232 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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