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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take Ex9L
Dear Mr Smith I am writing to inform you about the shortcomings of your restaurant and the substandard experience I had. It was my son's birthday and I booked a table for 7 at your restaurant last Sunday. My reason for choosing this restaurant was based on excellent reviews online. We ordered your best selling steaks and I asked the server to make it medium-rare, as this is how I like my steak. For the sides, I ordered the mashed potato. When I was served, I noticed that my steak was rare and I asked for medium-rare. The mashed potatoes were uncooked and had a strange burnt taste. As feedback, I would like you to ask the chef at your restaurant to adhere to the orders and the details mentioned by the diners, As these shortcomings can dent the image of your restaurant and ruin diners experience. I hope that you will take my feedback positively and do the necessary. Best Wishes Tony
Dear Mr Smith

I am writing to inform you about the shortcomings of your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
and the substandard experience I had.

It was my son's birthday and I booked a table for 7 at your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
last Sunday. My reason for choosing this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
was based
on excellent reviews online.

We ordered your
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
best selling
steaks and I asked the server to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it medium-rare, as this is how I like my steak. For the sides, I ordered the mashed potato. When I
was served
, I noticed that my steak was rare and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
asked for
medium-rare. The mashed potatoes
were uncooked
and had a strange burnt taste.

As feedback, I would like you to ask the chef at your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
to adhere to the orders and the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
mentioned by the diners, As these shortcomings can dent the image of your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
and ruin diners experience.

I hope that you will take my feedback
positively
and do the necessary.

Best Wishes

Tony
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IELTS letter You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
162 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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