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You are interested in applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign university. Write a letter to inquire about the course. In your letter: explain which course you are interested in say what you know about the university explain why you should receive the scholarship

You are interested in applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign university. Write a letter to inquire about the course. In your letter: explain which course you are interested in say what you know about the university explain why you should receive the scholarship XQ7w
Dear Sir or Madam, Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to inquire about a scholarship program that your university offers to foreign students. I have successfully graduated my bachelor’s degree in Electrical and Electronics Engineering and now I would like to pursue a master’s degree in Robotics at your premise. I have learned quite a lot about your university from its website. Needless to say, I like everything about your university which includes extremely modern and well-equipped classrooms, universal curriculum, affordable hostel accommodation, and highly qualified and experienced professors and lecturers. However, the most impressive fact about your university is its very high campus placement rate which is about 75 per cent. I am aware that it is not easy to get a scholarship at your university, on the contrary, I believe that my good grades in bachelor degree (GPA 3. 90 out of 4) and a high score in TOEFL (623 out of 677) would make me eligible to receive a scholarship. I look forward to hearing your response on my eligibility to receive a scholarship at your university. Yours faithfully, Kishor Gupta
Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to inquire about a scholarship program that your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
offers to foreign students. I have
successfully
graduated my bachelor’s degree in Electrical and Electronics Engineering and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
I would like to pursue a master’s degree in Robotics at your premise.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have learned quite a lot about your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
from its website. Needless to say, I like everything about your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
which includes
extremely
modern and well-equipped classrooms, universal curriculum, affordable hostel accommodation, and
highly
qualified and experienced professors and lecturers.
However
, the most impressive fact about your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
is its
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
high campus placement rate which is about 75 per cent.

I am aware that it is not easy to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a scholarship at your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
,
on the contrary
, I believe that my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
grades in bachelor degree (GPA 3. 90 out of 4) and a high score in TOEFL (623 out of 677) would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
me eligible to receive a scholarship.

I look forward to hearing your response on my eligibility to receive a scholarship at your university.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Kishor
Gupta
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IELTS letter You are interested in applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign university. Write a letter to inquire about the course. In your letter: explain which course you are interested in say what you know about the university explain why you should receive the scholarship

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
186 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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