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You live in an area where the local council has made some changes to regulations. You believe these changes are not good for the residents. v.2

You live in an area where the local council has made some changes to regulations. You believe these changes are not good for the residents. v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam, I am Alicia Vikander, a resident of the Asperö, Gothenburg area and a university lecturer, writing to express my disapproval of recent holding tax increase. The sudden increment is not cordially accepted by the people and as a representative of these people, you are requested to reconsider it. Increasing the holding tax to 25% from the next June would create some rage among ordinary citizens. People in our area are already paying an 18% holding tax, which is 2-3% higher than the national average, and making it 25% would only bring dissatisfaction to the local citizens. As a law-abiding resident, I have always honoured the regulation but I, as well as many others, also feel strongly about the decision. As a solution, I would like you to invite some members of the community to discuss the changes - a way to show that you are always respectful of people's decision and make the holding tax less than 20%. I sincerely thank you for your consideration and judgement. Yours faithfully, Alicia Vikander
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Alicia
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Vikander
, a resident of the
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Asperö
, Gothenburg area and a university lecturer, writing to express my disapproval of recent
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holding
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tax
increase. The sudden increment is not
cordially
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accepted
by the
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people
and as a representative of these
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people
, you
are requested
to reconsider it.

Increasing the
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holding
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tax
to 25% from the
next
June would create
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some
rage among ordinary citizens.
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People
in our area are already paying an 18%
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holding
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tax
, which is 2-3% higher than the national average, and making it 25% would
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only
bring dissatisfaction to the local citizens. As a law-abiding resident, I have always
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honoured
the regulation
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but
I,
as well
as
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many
others,
also
feel
strongly
about the decision.

As a solution, I would like you to invite
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some
members of the community to discuss the
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changes
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-
a way to
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show
that you are always respectful of
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people
's decision and
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make
the
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holding
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tax
less than 20%.

I
sincerely
thank you for your consideration and judgement.

Yours
faithfully
,

Alicia
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Vikander
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8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS letter You live in an area where the local council has made some changes to regulations. You believe these changes are not good for the residents. v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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