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You live in an area where the local council has made some changes to regulations. You believe these changes are not good for residents. Write a letter to a councillor. In your letter: Introduce yourself. Describe the problem. Say what you think the council should do about the situation.

You live in an area where the local council has made some changes to regulations. You believe these changes are not good for residents. Write a letter to a councillor. In your letter: Introduce yourself. Describe the problem. Say what you think the council should do about the situation. 1G6X
Dear Sir or Madam, I’m writing this letter to inform you about the problem we are facing because of new regulations in parking area near the metro station. The new rule imposed by the council has made almost impossible to park a vehicle around the station. My name is Bhavesh Janjarkia, I live in 163 Power Avenue, near Chadstone shopping centre, and around 400m away from the Melbourne metro station. According to the new regulation, no one can park their vehicles for more than 2 hours which is inconvenient for us to travel to work by metro because we used to park our cars or motorbikes for entire day. Moreover, reserved parking area for motorbike and cars have created a stressful environment for residents; as people do verbal fight with each other to get the suitable space for them. Furthermore, there are lots of off-street parking areas, as result, there are less space for pedestrian walking. Could I suggest the best possible solution to avoid these problems? If council forfeits off-street parking permission and provide permission to park people’s vehicles for entire day during weekdays except no parking on weekends, this can improve the situation of parking problem all citizens are facing right now. Thank you for consideration. Yours faithfully, Bhavesh.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m writing this letter to inform you about the problem we are facing
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because
of new regulations in
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parking
area near the metro station. The new
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rule
imposed by the council has made almost impossible to
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park
a vehicle around the station.

My name is
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Bhavesh
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Janjarkia
, I
The usual preposition for an exact address is "at" not "on". Did you mean "located at 163 Power Avenue"?
live in 163 Power Avenue
, near
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Chadstone
shopping
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centre
, and around
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400m
away from the Melbourne metro station. According to the new regulation, no one can
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park
their vehicles for more than 2 hours which is inconvenient for us to travel to work by metro
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because
we
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used
to
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park
our cars or motorbikes for entire day.
Moreover
, reserved
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parking
area for motorbike and cars have created a stressful environment for residents; as
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people
do verbal fight with each other to
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get
the suitable space for them.
Furthermore
, there are lots of off-street
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parking
areas, as result, there are less space for pedestrian walking.

Could I suggest the best possible solution to avoid these problems? If council forfeits off-street
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parking
permission and provide permission to
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park
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
’s vehicles for entire day during weekdays except no
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parking
on weekends, this can
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improve
the situation of
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parking
problem all citizens are facing right
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now
.

Thank you for consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Bhavesh
.
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IELTS letter You live in an area where the local council has made some changes to regulations. You believe these changes are not good for residents. Write a letter to a councillor. In your letter: Introduce yourself. Describe the problem. Say what you think the council should do about the situation.

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