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Successful individuals have to face the same obstacles and challenges in life

Successful individuals have to face the same obstacles and challenges in life AJ38M
Dear myself, You may feel exhausted and bored during this time when you have many tasks to complete, and you may want to quit up. If you continue to strive for achievements, everyone will admire and respect you. When others are more talented and intelligent than you, it is natural to be ashamed. Instead of comparing yourself to others, you should follow your ambitions. Successful individuals have to face the same obstacles and challenges in life as you, yet they continually strive forward after many failures. Now consider how delighted you are when you succeed in your academics and work. Please don't be lazy and delay because you have a lot of tasks, I realize these are difficult and tedious, but you must accomplish them as quickly as possible Thank you for your efforts
Dear myself,

You may feel exhausted and bored during this time when you have
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many
tasks to complete, and you may want to quit up. If you continue to strive for achievements, everyone will admire and respect you. When others are more talented and intelligent than you, it is natural to
be ashamed
.
Instead
of comparing yourself to others, you should follow your ambitions. Successful individuals
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have to
face the same obstacles and challenges in life as you,
yet
they
continually
strive forward after
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many
failures.

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Now
consider how delighted you are when you succeed in your academics and work.
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Please
don't be lazy and delay
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because
you have
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a lot of
tasks, I realize these are difficult and tedious,
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but
you
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must
accomplish them as
quickly
as possible

Thank you for your
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efforts

IELTS letter Successful individuals have to face the same obstacles and challenges in life

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  American English
3 paragraphs
133 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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