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aks to watch my dog on holiday

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Dear Adam, How is going? Hope you are superb. As you know, you owe me one, and that is the reason I am writing this letter. Next month i am travelling to New Zealand on holiday and It would last about a week. During these time I need to your assistance for my dog Ralph. All you have to do is make sure he has food and water and let him loose to run around a bit. That is more than enough. In case of emergency situations or if you need some help, please let me know via cell phone. See you soon.
Dear Adam,

How is going? Hope you are superb.

As you know, you owe me one, and
that is
the reason I am writing this letter.

Next
month
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am travelling to New Zealand on holiday and It would last about a week.

During these time I need to your assistance for my dog Ralph.

All you
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have to
do is
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make
sure he has food and water and
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let
him loose to run around a bit.

That is
more than
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enough
.

In case of emergency situations or if you need
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some
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help
,
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please
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let
me know via cell phone.

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See
you
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soon
.
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IELTS letter aks to watch my dog on holiday

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  American English
9 paragraphs
103 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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