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A complain letter to local council

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Dear Sir or Madam, I want to complain about garbage collection system in local community. As you may have noticed, there have been some flaws in this matter for a relatively long time. The rubbish bins all over the neighborhood gets full very fast and collection truck come too late. Hence, there is always a pile of rubbish on the streets and pedestrian section. A lot of problems have arisen because of this situation. Firstly, the sight of rubbishes piled up in area made a disgusting view for visitors. All neighbors feel ashamed when they have guests. To worsen things up, hygienic issues have happened. Small children are in tough with trashes when they play and have been infected by numerous diseases. To overcome this trouble, I suggest to add more bins for garbage collection and simultaneously increase the number and frequency of roaming of collection trucks. Another solution is to add some booths to gather recyclable trash from people in order to reduce volume of trash. With best regards, Hossein
Dear Sir or Madam,

I want to complain about garbage
collection
system in local community. As you may have noticed, there have been
some
flaws in this matter for a
relatively
long time.

The rubbish bins all over the neighborhood
gets
full
very
fast
and
collection
truck
come
too late.
Hence
, there is always a pile of rubbish on the streets and pedestrian section.

A lot of
problems have arisen
because of this
situation.
Firstly
, the sight of rubbishes piled up in area made a disgusting view for visitors. All neighbors feel ashamed when they have guests. To worsen things up, hygienic issues have happened.
Small
children are in tough with trashes when they play and have
been infected
by numerous diseases.

To overcome this trouble, I suggest to
add
more bins for garbage
collection
and
simultaneously
increase the number and frequency of roaming of
collection
trucks. Another solution is to
add
some
booths to gather recyclable trash from
people
in order to
reduce
volume of trash.

With best regards,

Hossein
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IELTS letter A complain letter to local council

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
170 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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