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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.

You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. x7Ng
Dear Sir or Madam, This is regarding the room inconvenient to stay. As you are aware of that I and Raj are residing in same rope. We have been hanging on for 2 months. It had been fine for one month thenceforth his approaches were changed. He often takes his friends to the territory enjoying until midnight. It distressed me a lot and I am not able to study and trance properly. The cleaness of the place completely blemished. So lots of bad smell and small moth around. It is tarnishing my well-being and desire throughly. I already spoken with him with reference to this but no upgrade in the action. Requesting you to take decisive process to get rid of the dispute. if you would have swapped my area it will be enormous for my forthcoming. I am eagerly looking forward for the positive response from you. Thanking you, Bharath
Dear Sir or Madam,

This is regarding the room inconvenient to stay. As you are aware of that I and Raj are residing in same rope. We have been hanging on for 2 months. It had been fine for one month thenceforth his approaches were
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changed
.

He
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often
takes his friends to the territory enjoying until midnight. It distressed me a
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lot and
I am not able to study and trance
properly
. The
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cleaness
of the place completely blemished.
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So
lots of
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bad
smell and
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small
moth around. It is tarnishing my well-being and desire
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throughly
.

I already spoken with him with reference to this
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but
no upgrade in the action. Requesting you to take decisive process to
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get
rid of the dispute.
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if
you
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would have swapped
my area it will be enormous for my forthcoming. I am
eagerly
looking forward for the
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positive
response from you.

Thanking you,

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Bharath

IELTS letter You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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