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r Herath Bandaralage Kithsiri Kumara Bandara No 210, Digampathaha Junction, Digampathaha

r Herath Bandaralage Kithsiri Kumara Bandara No 210, Digampathaha Junction, Digampathaha r00L
The Manager NSB Bank, Dambulla branch, Good Day! Dear Manager, May I request followings; 1) please inform me regarding the sum amount of the monthly installments of the loan to be deposited, for the next year from 01/04/2021 to 31/03/2022. 2) then obtaining email with a scan copy of the letter issued according to the attached request letter, I have attached email with Signed equest letter with account details NIC scan copy Passbook scan copy Previously issued letter from the Bank I will send money trasfer recept later following depositing the amount to be made Thanks in advance.
The Manager

NSB Bank,

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Dambulla
branch,

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Good
Day!

Dear Manager,

May I request followings;

1)
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please
inform me regarding the sum amount of the monthly installments of the loan to
be deposited
, for the
next
year
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from 01/04
/2021 to 31/03/2022.

2) then obtaining email with a scan copy of the letter issued according to the attached request letter,

I have attached email with

Signed
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equest
letter with account
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details


NIC scan copy

Passbook scan copy

Previously issued letter from the Bank

I will
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send
money
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trasfer
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recept
later following depositing the amount to
be made


Thanks in advance.
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