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r Herath Bandaralage Kithsiri Kumara Bandara No 210, Digampathaha Junction, Digampathaha

r Herath Bandaralage Kithsiri Kumara Bandara No 210, Digampathaha Junction, Digampathaha M00o
Dr. Herath Bandaralage Kithsiri Kumara Bandara Medical Officer Grade 9 General practitioner Muqniyat Health Center, Muqniyat. Staff No. 75126 24/03/2021 Director General Ministry of Health, Directorate General of Health Survices, Al Dhahira Governorate, Directorate of Administrative Affairs. Through MOIC Muqniyat Health center, Muqniyat. Postponement of the Annual Leave Dear Sir/Madam, According to the year 2021 annual leave plan of the Health Center proposed and approved by the Ministry, my anual leave will be on 4th of April 2021and upto 01st of May 2021. However, with the corrent ongoing Covid 19 pandamic situation and my private requerements, I would like to postpone till forthcoming months of Octomber or November. Hence, I am respectfully writing to inform and request the matter to be considered, if it is possible. Thanks in advance. Yours sincerely, Signature of Dr Herath Bandaralage Kithsiri
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Kithsiri
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Bandara


Medical Officer Grade 9

General practitioner

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Muqniyat
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Health
Center,

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Muqniyat
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Staff No. 75126

24/03/2021

Director General

Ministry of Health,

Directorate General of
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Health
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Survices
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Al
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Dhahira
Governorate,

Directorate of Administrative Affairs.

Through

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MOIC


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Muqniyat
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Health
center,

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Muqniyat
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Postponement of the Annual
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Leave


Dear Sir/Madam,

According to the year 2021 annual
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leave
plan of the
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Health
Center proposed and approved by the Ministry, my
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anual
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leave
will be on 4th of April 2021and
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upto
01st of May 2021.
However
, with the
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corrent
ongoing
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Covid 19
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pandamic
situation and my private
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requerements
, I would like to postpone till forthcoming months of
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Octomber
or November.
Hence
, I am
respectfully
writing to inform and request the matter to
be considered
, if it is possible.

Thanks in advance.

Yours
sincerely
,

Signature of Dr
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Herath
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Bandaralage
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Kithsiri

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