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Informal letter to your friend who lives abroad and invited you to his place in vacation.

Informal letter to your friend who lives abroad and invited you to his place in vacation. emoB
Dear Samuel, I'm very glad to hear that you have invited me at your place this vacation. You know, I am very happy to see your invitation at your place in Amsterdam. I was very excited to see you too but it will be difficult for me to work out this plan as I got stuck in my work this vacation. Do you remember our teacher Mr Smith? I got appointed under his guidance as assistant professor. You know what! I started the work only few months back due to which my schedule is very hectic. He suggested me to work with him in this vacation also. You'd love to hear that I am enjoying my work allot although it is a bit hectic. Don't worry my friend! I will definitely visit your place in my next vacation as it's been long time to see you. Ask my nephew if he misses me or not? because his uncle remembers him daily. Lots of love and regard to you and your family. Waiting for your invitation on my next vacation! Your friend, Preet
Dear Samuel, I'm
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glad to hear that you have invited me at your place this
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vacation
. You know, I am
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very
happy to
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your invitation at your place in Amsterdam. I was
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excited to
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you too
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it will be difficult for me to
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work
out this plan as I
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got
stuck in my
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work
this
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vacation
. Do you remember our teacher Mr Smith? I
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got
appointed under his guidance as assistant professor. You know what! I
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started
the
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work
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only
few months back due to which my schedule is
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very
hectic. He suggested me to
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work
with him in this
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vacation
also
. You'd
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love
to hear that I am enjoying my
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work
allot although it is a bit hectic.

Don't worry my friend! I will definitely visit your place in my
next
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vacation
as it's been long time to
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see
you. Ask my nephew if he misses me or not?
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because
his uncle remembers him daily. Lots of
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love
and regard to you and your family.

Waiting for your invitation on my
next
vacation!

Your friend,
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Preet
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IELTS letter Informal letter to your friend who lives abroad and invited you to his place in vacation.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
181 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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