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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would

Dear Sir/Madam, I am Blair Waldorf, a student of Damian House. I am writing to give some feedback of living situation with my roommate. We found it is difficult for us to live together because of different living habits. My roommate, Kate Smith, comes from India. She loves cooking curry in the kitchen. It creates strong smell and the odour lasts long. I understand it is the traditional food in her country and I respect her diet. However, I cannot stand for the smell. Kate tried different methods to get smell out of the flat, but they were unsuccessful. We agreed that it is hard for us to live together. I am hoping to move out from this flat. I do not mind to sharing flat with another student, so I prefer living in two-bedroom dormitory. I hope I can have a roommate who have similar cultural background. It is easy for us to build up the relationship. I am looking forward receiving your reply. Yours faithfully, Blair Waldorf

Dear Sir/Madam,

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. I am writing to give This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 feedback of living situation with my roommate.

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live
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different
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odour
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get
 smell out of the flat, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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live
 together.

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move
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 hope I can have a roommate who have similar cultural background. It is easy for us to build up the relationship.

I am looking forward receiving your reply.

Yours faithfully
,

Blair Waldorf