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Dear Sir, I am a resident of Valencia apartments situated at the Western Expressway and I am writing to enquire about the upcoming shopping center project.

Dear Sir, I am a resident of Valencia apartments situated at the Western Expressway and I am writing to enquire about the upcoming shopping center project. I came across the development plan while listening to the local radio station, as well as, I read about the same in the recent weekly periodical of Estate News. I am pleased that the local authorities have approved and welcomed the idea of a shopping complex in the vicinity. This would mean, the localities will no longer have to drive miles towards the downtown every weekend fetching groceries and mandatory supplies. As a curious inhabitant, I would like to know that by when we are expecting the commencement of the commercial complex. Additionally, will the shopping space be confined to brands of apparels or electronic gadgets or will the mall have hyper city or supermarket catering to daily needs. Last but not the least, during the construction phase will there be any road closures or route diversions. Looking forward for your response. Your’s faithfully Alex Jhonson

Dear Sir,

I am a resident of Valencia apartments situated at the Western Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Expressway, and
Expressway and
 I am writing to Possible spelling mistake. ‘enquire’ is British English.inquire
enquire
 about the upcoming shopping center project.

I came across the development plan while listening to the local radio station, as well
 as, I read about the same in the recent weekly periodical of Estate News.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
 am This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfied
pleased
 that the local authorities have approved and welcomed the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 of a shopping complex in the vicinity. This would mean, the localities will no longer This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 drive miles towards the downtown every weekend fetching groceries and mandatory supplies.

As a curious inhabitant, I would like to know that by when we are expecting the commencement of the commercial complex. Additionally
, will the shopping space be confined
 to brands of apparels or electronic gadgets or will the mall have hyper city or supermarket catering to daily needs. Last This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not the least, during the construction phase will there be any road closures or route diversions.

Looking forward for your response.

The possessive pronoun “Yours” is spelled without an apostrophe.Yours
Your’s
faithfully


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