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You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, • describe what you enjoyed about the course • say how much cooking you've done since the course • suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter in reply of providing feedback on cookery class which I had accomplished. I had completed one of the trending cuisine course which was Mexican dishes from your cookery school. The coaching provided over there was exclusive. It included all the Mexican cuisine such as Mexican rice, Mexican bhel and many more. The mesmerized thing during course was practical sessions which aid all the candidates to learn dishes quickly. Since I joined the class, I got various opportunities to learn many delicious food items which enhanced my cooking skills. I made variety of scrumptious Mexican meals and every member of my family loved it. All the courses offered by you are an outstanding though I would like to suggest one course which is a sweet tooth dishes. I personally recommended you to emphasis on such type of courses which will be the beloved items of children include cakes, donuts, cup- cakes. I feel grateful to provide my feedback on this course. I strongly recommended you to think on above suggested course which is the most trending one recently. Yours Faithfully, Khushboo.

Dear Sir or Madam,

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