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You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the town council. In your letter, do the following: say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it.

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to seek more information about the construction of a shopping center at Brenner Street, in which I reside. It was really surprising for me when I read the news in the local daily about the construction. There are no big shopping facilities in our locality, and so we have to reach the town to shop. The plan is really beneficial for us as we can save our time and money. We also think that this would make the place developed. One thing I would like to know about is about the parking facility. As the street is basically a residential area, it would be difficult for us when vehicles are parked in front of the gates. I would suggest an underground parking facility rather than looking for other alternatives. I would also like to know the estimated time of completion of the project. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Walton
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to seek more information about the construction of a shopping center at Brenner Street, in which I reside.

It was
really surprising
for me when I read the news in the local daily about the construction. There are no
big
shopping facilities in our locality, and
so
we
have to
reach the town to shop. The plan is
really
beneficial for us as we can save our time and money. We
also
think
that this would
make
the place developed.

One thing I would like to know
about is about
the parking facility. As the street is
basically
a residential area, it would be difficult for us when vehicles
are parked
in front of the gates. I would suggest an underground parking facility
rather
than looking for other alternatives. I would
also
like to know the estimated time of completion of the project.

I
look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Walton
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IELTS letter You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the town council. In your letter, do the following: say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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