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You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the town council. In your letter, do the following: say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to know more about the construction of a shopping complex which is planned to be built adjacent to my residence. I have a few concerns, which I initially discussed with our neighbor and thought it should be shared with you. I first heard about the construction from my neighbor and later read an advertisement board down the street. It is obviously a good plan of developing a shopping complex and making the area more commercial. It will also helpful for us buy any kind of grocery and other requirements. With many positive outcomes, I am also concerned about the traffic congestion that it will lead to. The residential roads are itself narrow, and the road is wide enough to accommodate two cars. I would also like to know more about the expansion of the road to avoid traffic jams around the corner and any other development plans around. Request you to take this into consideration. Yours faithfully, Harshil Shah
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to know more about the construction of a shopping complex which
is planned
to
be built
adjacent to my residence. I have a few concerns, which I
initially
discussed with our neighbor and
thought
it should
be shared
with you.

I
first
heard about the construction from my neighbor and later read an advertisement board down the street. It is
obviously
a
good
plan of developing a shopping complex and making the area more commercial. It will
also
helpful for us
buy
any kind of grocery and other requirements.

With
many
positive
outcomes, I am
also
concerned about the traffic congestion that it will lead to. The residential roads are itself narrow, and the road is wide
enough
to accommodate two cars.

I would
also
like to know more about the expansion of the road to avoid traffic jams around the corner and any other development plans around.

Request you to take this into consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

Harshil
Shah
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IELTS letter You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the town council. In your letter, do the following: say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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