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You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to explain the reason why you decline the offer, express your gratitude and explain your like your current jo very much

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Mark Lester Marte. I am one of the successful applicants who have applied for the corporate head training program that will be assigned to you main headquarters at Osaka, Japan for one year. I am sending this letter to formally decline to the job offer due to personal matter. I am thankful that out of hundreds of applicants my application was selected. This will always be one of the highlights of my career for this year. My current company offered me to be part of Board of Director’s starting last week. This is one of the role I have asked to the owner of the company since I was promoted for managerial position. Turning down the offer will sound unreasonable since I have requested and work for it for the last five years. Sincerely yours, Mark Lester Marte

Dear Sir or Madam,

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 main headquarters at Osaka, Japan for one year. I am sending this letter to formally
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 am thankful that out of hundreds of applicants my application was selected
. This will always be one of the highlights of my career for this year.

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current
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company
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company
 since I was promoted
 for managerial position. Turning down the offer will sound unreasonable since I have requested and work for it for the last five years.

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