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You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • give details of your study plans • explain why you want to get a part-time job • suggest how your friend could help you find a job

You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • give details of your study plans • explain why you want to get a part-time job • suggest how your friend could help you find a job k2bO

Dear Sam, Trust you are doing well! Firstly, I am sorry that I am writing only now. As you know, I am moving to Canada to pursue MBA and there is a lot to be done and I haven’t had a minute to myself. I have confirmed my admission for MBA in Marketing at Texas University last week, and I can’t wait to start my course soon. Moreover, this is going to be a two years full-time study program where-in I need to be determined and perform well with outstanding grades throughout. However, this studying abroad plan has put a lot of monetary pressure on me and my family. I Therefore, I am planning to obtain a part-time job for myself so that I can handle my own expenses independently without bothering my parents. In addition to this, I will look for an internship that not only helps me financially, but will also enhance my technical skills. Since you have been living in that city for more than 10 years now, I can totally rely on your guidance for my job search. Apart from this, you could also refer me in your organisation which is a core industry of my field of interest. Furthermore, some of the companies have been shortlisted by me and I am attaching the list with this letter. If you could go through it and let me know which can be a better fit for me, it will be much appreciated. Waiting for your suggestions on this soon. Do give my regards to you sister. Best Wishes, Sonal

Dear Sam,

Trust you are doing well! Firstly
, I am sorry that I am writing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
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now
. As you know, I am moving to Canada to pursue MBA and there is a lot to be done
 and I haven’t had a minute to myself.

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start
 my course This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. Moreover
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 and perform well with outstanding grades throughout.

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 expenses independently
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.

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, I can totally
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let
 me know which can be a better fit for me, it will be much appreciated.

Waiting for your suggestions on this This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
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. Do give my regards to you sister.

Best Wishes,

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