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You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realised there were some problems with the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter: explain why you took the job describe the problems that you experienced suggest what could be done about them

You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realised there were some problems with the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter: explain why you took the job describe the problems that you experienced suggest what could be done about them VJE3

Dear sir, I am writing this letter with regard to recent advertisement in local newspaper for the post of Accountant Manager on fulltime basis in your company. I am Naksha Patel from Anand working as accountant in Apollo Pharmacy Ltd. on part time basis. I would like to apply for the same post showed in the advertisement. I had an experience of two years in the fields of accountancy which provides me valuable and important knowledge including vast experience which now enhances me towards more confidence to work as a fulltime employee Apart from this recently I have also completed my masters in accountancy so that I can set my career for better future. I feel that I am eligible person for this post because I am now familiar with the company and how I should perform all the tasks given by the company with all my abilities. Moreover, as I have discussed above my masters degree will allow me to apply all the theoretical and practical knowledge which will beneficial for the company. I hope you will consider me as eligible and appropriate person and appoint me for this post. I am optimistic towards this application and looking for a positive and prompt reply. Thanking you. Yours faithfully, Naksha.

Dear sir,

I am writing this letter with regard to recent advertisement in local newspaper for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpolepanel
post
 of Accountant Manager on Possible spelling mistake found.full time
fulltime
 basis in your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
.

I am Possible spelling mistake found.NASANashNauseaNatashaSashaMarsha
Naksha
 Patel from Anand working as accountant in Apollo Pharmacy Ltd. on This word is normally spelled with hyphen.part-time
part time
 basis. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would like to apply for the same You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpolepanel
post
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 in the advertisement.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 had an experience of two years in the fields of accountancy which provides me valuable and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 knowledge including vast experience which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 enhances me towards more confidence to work as a Possible spelling mistake found.full time
fulltime
 employee

Apart from this recently I have also
 completed my masters in accountancy This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I can set my career for better future.

I feel that I Please check whether an article is missing: "am a eligible" or "am an eligible"am a eligibleam an eligible
am eligible
 person for this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpolepanel
post
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I am This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 familiar with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 and how I should perform all the tasks This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 with all my abilities. Moreover
, as I have discussed above my For an academic degree, use "master’s".master’s
masters
 degree will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 me to apply all the theoretical and practical knowledge which will beneficial for the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
.

I hope you will consider me as eligible and appropriate person and appoint me for this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpolepanel
post
. I am optimistic towards this application and looking for a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 and prompt reply.

Thanking you.

Yours faithfully
,

Possible spelling mistake found.NASANashNauseaNatashaSashaMarsha
Naksha
. 