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Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday, you have a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it. In your letter: when and where you hired it describe how the accident happened what kind of action did you take after the accident

Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday, you have a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it. In your letter: when and where you hired it describe how the accident happened what kind of action did you take after the accident aWEm

Dear Sir/Madam I am Smith and the purpose of writing this letter is to let you know in detail about an unexpected event that happened after I had rented a car from your company. The car that I have rented is a black Explorer with the name plate number IA 3699 and has a sun roof. The place from where I have rented this car is Cedar Rapids, Iowa. it was rented on 9th June for a period of 10 days, i. e. till 18th June from the Avis Centre that is located near the airport. On 10th June I started my trip to Denver early in the morning at 5am and the journey was going good until I met an accident. A bird suddenly came down from the sky and it hit the car headlight. Due to the force, the headlight broke and also the bird was severely injured. The damage to the car is not severe. After the sudden strike, I pulled the car on the right shoulder to see the damage. Fortunately, as it was daytime the headlights were not needed and so I searched for the nearest garage and drove the car for repairing the damage. The headlight was fixed and then I was able to complete my further journey. Yours faithfully Smith

Dear Sir/Madam

I am Smith and the purpose of writing this letter is to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know in detail about an unexpected This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 that happened after I had rented a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 from your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 that I have rented is a black Explorer with the name plate number IA 3699 and has a sun roof. The place from where I have rented this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 is Cedar Rapids, Iowa. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
was rented
 on 9th June for a period of 10 days, There should be no space here: "i.e.".i.e.
i. e.
 till 18th June from the Avis Possible spelling mistake. 'Centre' is British English.Center
Centre
 that is located
 near the airport.

On 10th June I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 my trip to Denver early in the morning at 5am and the journey was going This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 until I met an accident. A bird suddenly
 came down from the sky and it hit the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 headlight. Due to the force, the headlight broke and also
 the bird was severely
 injured. The damage to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 is not severe.

After the sudden strike, I pulled the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 on the right shoulder to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 the damage. Fortunately
, as it was daytime the headlights were not Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).needed, and
needed and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I searched for the nearest garage and drove the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 for repairing the damage. The headlight was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectified
fixed
 and then I was able to complete my further
 journey.

Yours faithfully


Smith